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:iconwispoct: Round 2
:iconclickmon: vs :iconla-zombie-monkey:

I'm relieved that I managed to finish this within 3 weeks with the vacationing, work, brother taking over the computer to play games and other distractions I had. However, I had to squeeze more content in each page instead of spreading it out so the page number is something manageable within my time frame. I apologize for any pacing issues. And sadly, I didn't get to play around with panels as I wanted for this round-- I had to keep them simple so I can work faster.

You'll notice Cecilia's pants goes from black to white-- that's when I went away for my week vacation. I hate inconsistencies like that but I had finished drawing the lineart before it dawned on me :iconsphealwithitplz:

Thank you Zombie-Monkey for allowing me to slug Cosenti's head off~ Him and Chaos make an adorable couple. Thank you =Maraphy for letting me use Hazel, and *Inqling for proofreading my entry once again!

I know there's a plot hole with Edgar (being a robot)... but I had this storyline laid out since the beginning and I plan to finish it the way I intended it to be! Hurrhurr.

Zombie-Monkey's entry can be read here! It has delicious gore~ [link]

Characters belong to their respective owners.
People wondering where Jonah came from, read B 1 in the links below.
And hope you're enjoying the cheesy double meaning love-themed titles! I SURE AM!


Ref
BA 0 | B 0
BA 1 | B 1 | P 1
BA 2 | B 2 | P 2
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:iconfinchfully:
finchfully Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
Holy fucking shit (pardon my swearing) but MAN, that was AMAZING. I dont even MIND that Cecelia and Jonah were brutally murdered because DAMN THAT WAS SO GOOD.
Maaaate you have serious serious talent. Wooowww.
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:iconsprojler:
SPROJLER Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
....Clickmon... you're a Fu@#&+$ god of comic... beutifull layed panels and thrilling story, SWEET!
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:iconmikallen:
Mikallen Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lookit the little Ayami spirit with her little antennae. Awwww. <3
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:icontherichnobody:
therichnobody Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
As rare as it is for me to be on dA these days, I always come back to see your entries, man

Such a captivating storyline, ha ha. Kept me glued to the seat (even when I had to /go/ TMITMITMI xD)

Jacked up that they are "already dead" but like you said earlier, happy endings tend to be overdone and rather boring. Nice to see a dark twist applied to things, especially cutesy characters such as Hazel and Jonah.

Just... good job, dude! Most definitely. :nod:
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:iconspace-aged:
space-aged Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011   General Artist
Your comics are just so much fun to read. I really liked how death's speech boxes were coffin shaped.
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Thank you! Hehe!
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:iconrikyo:
Rikyo Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Pretty amazing as always~ I like how u did Death's speech bubbles, a nice touch!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Thank youu! I was afraid the coffin speech boxes would be cheezy, haha!
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:iconla-zombie-monkey:
la-zombie-monkey Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
And is that a hoof I spy stepping on Ophio?:iconhurrrplz:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
None other~
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:iconla-zombie-monkey:
la-zombie-monkey Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
Annd Cosenti would probably land smack on his face if he tried anything else on those hooves.;)
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:iconkatizua:
katizua Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nut crackers for the win.
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:iconseekerpsycho:
SeekerPsycho Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Nothing but praise, man. Nothing but praise. I'm loving the action and the story and the art. I'm looking forward to more! Laughed at Jonah's expression when his soul jumped back into his body.

And there's something in the subtleties with all those cameos at the end that just depicts them perfectly.

But don't sweat Edgar. Sentient, emotional robot is something of a grey area.
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:iconkatribou:
katribou Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Man, you're amazing at storytelling. This is amazingly done, as usual. x]
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Thank you! And sorry for the little goof I made on Cecilia, but the brother thing is fixed!
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:iconkatribou:
katribou Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student General Artist
You're very welcome!
Haha, no problem. ^^
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:iconfe5ter:
Fe5ter Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Seeing a young character gruesomely and painfully die in a OCT is very taboo but then again it makes this entry very intense, hope Dallas is able to save those that have fallen but like your other comics from other OCTs theres no "happy endings"

Jonah 10
Hazal 15
Cecelia 16

They all died so young :(


Slight error when Cecilia was about to die Dallas said boyfriend instead of brother
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Oh shoot!! Thanks for mentioning that! Haha, Pax Prime really disorganized my mind-- I'll be fixing that once I get back home from work.

Sadly, death is death. I have a "happy" ending for those who've died, though it's more of a lukewarm remembrance; I find endings with everyone revived and happy a little cheezy and cliche. Careen's and Dallas's ending is already sappy itself, and adding more is something I don't want, haha. Perhaps I'll think of something with more substance with the other characters...
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:iconla-zombie-monkey:
la-zombie-monkey Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Ah, love it all, Dear.:heart: Completely nailed Cosenti and his dialogue and Dallas is just so damn cute. Favourite parts being the 'smile for me' and as sadistic as it is...Jonah getting taken down and the nutcracking panel.:iconbeautifulheartplz:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Hehehe~! Dallas going for the low blow-- what a coward. I'm glad you love it! Hehe! Thank you!
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darmoon87 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I

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:iconteachmemogster:
TeachMeMogster Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
The mascot thing made me laugh ngl THIS IS GREAT MANG
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Thank you! Haha.
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grievousfan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student General Artist
Pffff. My gosh I love your comics so hard ;-; :heart: Great plot twist at the end, too~

And I absolutely LOVE how you portrayed Chaos :iconawwehplz:It's like he's in drag or something but it works :XD::heart:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Fufufu~ Thank youuu~
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:iconmarraphy:
Marraphy Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my God.... everything... asdfghjkl

especially Death's reveal at the end, it was just fantastic, epic, and kind of tear-jerking. Excellent art too! And I'm glad Hazel got to be in the group for a while! Even though she died... but was technically already dead. Thanks for including her!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Thank you again for letting me use her! I originally had more interaction between the 4 of them but time wasn't at my favour.

Thank you!
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:iconmarraphy:
Marraphy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! That would have been nice, but I'm grateful you wanted to use her, period : P

I was really confused/shocked at the part with "evil" Hazel, lol. It's a shame that all 3 of Dallas's furry friends had to die in that battle, but it was still a very interesting story!
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:iconwilizin:
WILIZIN Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait.... wait wait wait. So death just did...

OMAE WA MO SHINDERIRU!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
ATATATATATATATATATATATATA!
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:icondoodleniks:
Doodleniks Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This was intense. .O.
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:iconcatmaniac8x:
Catmaniac8x Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
OOOOH...nice plot twist :D
I like the notion that everyone's in limbo in WISP, makes for an interesting storyline! I really hope you make it to the final round, I wanna see how this ends :D
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:iconmirchuchu:
MirChuChu Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
My mind had been blown! I can't even—HNNNG! That kick to the nuts, what a way to go. But what is really getting to me is what Death reveals to Dallas in the end. Fantastic work! <3
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Thank youuu!! There's much more secrets in the town of Wisp!! Until next time!
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