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For :iconthereal-oct: round 1.

:iconclickmon: vs. :iconspirogs:

I'm so happy I got this done with a week left before deadline because now I can finally rest my wrist that was cramping the whole time I drew this, ugh. Drawing work-related stuff at work and comic at home = death to my wrist. So... many... zoomlines...

Anyways, sorry Spirogs that you had to die, I had this storyline and whatnot planned out before the round, and plugged you in. Believe me, I feel guilty for killing off a nice person. ...I can't draw girls, kids or proper heights for the life of me.

And... I have the feeling that I revealed too much in this round... oh wells, there's a lot of questions and mysteries to be uncover and answered~ It's difficult to keep things subtle and not wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords wordswordswordswordswordswordswords.

Note: I'll be altering the appearance of people's summoning device slightly to fit in the world of the R.E.A.L. so that it has some way of charging, displaying images and remain attached to the artist.

Norin, Dohi, Kiyu and Nathanael belong to :iconspirogs:
Miss no mask, Yuritsuki and paper dolls belong to :iconyuritsuki:
Edelweiss belongs to :iconskylord:
Kheller, Dylan, Terry and Clickmon belong to :iconclickmon:

Check out ~Spirogs's entry over here [link]

DmS 0
DmS Intermission - 0
DmS 1
DmS Intermission - 1
DmS 2


Edit: Whoops, forgot to change the xx's to proper numbers. And I forgot to draw in the Kamens' tails and Kheller's flower patterns in some of the panels.... uuuughhh...
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:iconnoisybunny:
NoisyBunny Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
how do you get the pages to flip like that?
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:iconkurotenchiyamito:
KuroTenchiYamito Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009  Student Digital Artist
o.o wow...
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:icontigershark06:
Tigershark06 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW...I love the flippable book...I don't know how you did it but it's quite cool!

The storyline was great too...disturbing, but wonderful!
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:iconcharlieboythe1st:
charlieboythe1st Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009
I feel almost guilty for not reading this WAY sooner. You're still fucking amazing, you know that? :thumbsup:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009
Hehe, thanks.
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:iconkokoniko:
KokoNiko Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Your entries are very beautifully done and they look so professional. I also believe your storyline in aatr seems to be the most intricate and very original compared to other entrants and I hope you go far in this tournament.

I also can't believe you can dish out such a long entry with such high quality in just over a week! I hope you still had a chance to sleep and eat properly.

Congratulations on making it through round one and I wish you the best of luck in future rounds!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Thank you so much! I'm heart broken you and Renata didn't go through to the second round! But this isn't the end of the RenaKoKo team is it...?
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:iconkokoniko:
KokoNiko Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Thank you for your sympathy and I apologize, I'm pretty sure it was because of my awful basic script that we didn't pass. I think Renata should save herself and kick me out as a partner since I'm obviously not a good one, lol.

Hopefully you will be able to avenge all the fallen, including Renata :iconheeeplz:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
You two should have won, yours had a lot more content but alas...

I don't know about the avenging part... reviving the dead is a nice thing to do but so cheesy in a story (look at Naruto and the end of the Naruto vs. Pain arc, such a cop-out). But I'll think of something...
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:iconkokoniko:
KokoNiko Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Thank you, but I do feel really bad for Renata because she spent so much time on it and I couldn't do anything because I am just the lame script writer :iconcryforeverplz:

LOL I'm sorry I didn't mean to like add us in any way, I just meant to do your best and win the tournament if you can--and then when you do, you can lie and say 'YES--oh yeah I guess I did it for renata--but mostly YAY for me :iconheeeplz:'
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:icongogodan:
GoGoDan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
EXPLODING SUMMONING DEVICES!?!

BUT I USE MY HANDS TO SUMMON!!!


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im glad im just a spectator
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Spectators in the R.E.A.L. die too-- whoops, did I say too much~?
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:icondragonack27:
dragonack27 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Hobbyist
They all died ;A;
Noriiiiiin ;A;
Nuuuuu :noes:

Really excellent entry. I can see how you won.
Your pacing was amazing, and your character representation (as far as I know) was spot on :)
Wonderful story you've got going on... I wonder what the R.E.A.L. has in store for the rest of the competitors.
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:iconskylord:
Skylord Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I do NOT envy Edelweiss's position right now. XD
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:iconicecreammouth:
Icecreammouth Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
Oh dear, that would be really bad for the artists who have glasses as summoning tools. Our faces will be blown off.
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
How about devices near the groin? Hahah~
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:iconicecreammouth:
Icecreammouth Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
That's extremely disturbing, although I must admit that I find it sadistically amusing in some way. Miss No Mask's plan is very clever, given that most of the competitors (and auditioners) value their summoning devices like a personal treasure.
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:iconvitaliusdeosgirl:
vitaliusdeosgirl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
oh my gosh this is amazing^^ it's so epic^^
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:iconmugenius:
MuGenius Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
AAAAAMAAAZING!!!!
what did youmake this with?
i love how your characters are like realizing the 4d that's so awesome funniest part is when kheller said "your this kids bitch" hahahaha and then you were like " i can change your personality and story anytime" sweeeet
what program did you use for this???
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
Making the comic or flashbook?

And thank you!
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:iconmugenius:
MuGenius Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Flashbook!!!!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
There's a template online called flip page I believe. You'll have to tweak with the actionscript to customize it.
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:iconsonicedge7:
SonicEdge7 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
damn...that was...BEAUTIFUL!!! :iconawwwplz:
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:iconjerkdouglas:
JerkDouglas Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Christ. I draw easy sloppy shit and my hand is completely unserviceable right now. I shudder to think what TITAN-POWERS you contain in your drawing hand.

This was truly awesome, also.
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:iconfred-s-kaed:
Fred-S-Kaed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
omg! you violently killed spirogs! XD
... i wonder how you would've altered my unicorn to be atached to me to fit your storyline... good thing I'm not in, I guess... :3
Awesome entry! I loved it. Great plot ahead, I see... I had some difficulty telling stuff apart, but aside of that, was wonderful.
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
Thank you~

What kind of stuff you had difficulty telling apart? Anything that will help me improve.
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:iconfred-s-kaed:
Fred-S-Kaed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
Some of the characters were hard to difirenciate for me(but thats a comon problem that I have)I'd say the fighting ones were the tougher. And some of the action was a bit unclear, especially by the end of the fight.(sorry, I suck at giving complete and enlighting critique...)
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
Oh, no, you're being helpful.

Was it my and/or Spirog's characters that look similar? And action is definitely something I need to work on. That and pacing/transitions.
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:iconfred-s-kaed:
Fred-S-Kaed Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
his together and your's together were hard to tell appart.(at least I knew who was wining o.0)
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:iconcloudslide:
CloudSlide Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Wow. That's some serious dedication. I stated earlier than I've ever started for OC rounds and I'm still behind. Although I can't do pages at work though (which SUCKS!) But this is really, really good though.

Conspiracy? Intrigue? Mystery? Hell yeah!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
Thank you! Yea, I wish I could draw my comic at work too!

Good luck on your entry! You have a good grasp on action *jealous jealous*
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:iconcloudslide:
CloudSlide Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
lol. Yeah, but that comes at a cost of being timely and detracting away from story...
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:iconobsessedkitten:
obsessedkitten Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Damnnn, you're good :D No, you're awesome!! And I can't wait to read more!! I need to know more about the plot NOW.
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
Everyone get their own robotic narwhal and ride it in the sky where they find the portal of doom which leads to your room, and we loot your place. The End.

Happy now?! I just spoiled my storyline!
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:iconobsessedkitten:
obsessedkitten Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow. Nobel prize in literature. I WILL VOTE FOR YOU!
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:iconyazzydream:
YazzyDream Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Student General Artist
That was badass! Wow, things are really rolling underway. Muuch easier to read, and really dark and foreboding. *shiver*
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Thankies, I try not to use those small comments excessively, but they add so much more to a character.

Fufufu, it's going to get a lot more dark in the next chapter (if I make it).
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:iconbuuwho:
BuuWho Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, Click. Damn.
Your storyline is unbelievably detailed and..well awesome for lack of a better word..not the mention the artwork is fantastic! Brilliant entry! Can't wait to see how your vision unfolds~
:eager:
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
I hope I make it that far to establish it! Thank you and get back to work!!! GO KICK SOME ASSSSS!
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:iconwaltzinghippie:
waltzinghippie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Guh D: This. is. INCREDIBLE. Holy crap! I wish I could have this is paperback haha. Wow. I think my favorite is at the end, though, with all the speculation. INTRIGUE!!
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Thankies..!! I have so much planned but I don't know if I have enough time or wrist-power...!!! ARGHHH *breaks in half*
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:iconwaltzinghippie:
waltzinghippie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Noo!! *gets the duct tape*
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:iconbatlesbo:
batlesbo Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
The ... the pages are.. shifting with the mouse movements.... xDDD I never saw anything like it!
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:iconluvtehcomix:
luvtehcomix Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
all i gotta say is... wtf, dude?!:iconwhutplz:
i mean, as rad as that was, that was just mean.
(not that i'm implying a personal attack, it was clearly for the sake of plot, but, still...:iconsingletearplz:)
it was really f'n rad, though...:iconexplodeplz:
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:iconink-imp:
ink-imp Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009  Professional General Artist
dammit click this is looong. addictive.
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
Where's your entry!?
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:iconink-imp:
ink-imp Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Professional General Artist
coming soon
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:iconbouncymischa:
bouncymischa Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
Wow! That was an incredible piece to accomplish in 1-1/2 weeks. Mmmm, I have so much further to go if I can't even get 4 pages done in that time... <.<; XD

But it was definitely spectacular, and it's rather unique for having such an overlaid metaplot. Makes me glad I'm out here in SE-land, though. Hopefully those rules don't apply to those of us who failed to get in... <.<
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:iconclickmon:
clickmon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009
Are you planning to do a SE with my crew? If you want to know, Miss no mask and other judges seek out and destroy outsiders (which are just people wandering around, without their OCs or summoning devices -- basically they were summoned to the R.E.A.L. by mistake/glitch).
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:iconbouncymischa:
bouncymischa Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
I hadn't really planned on anything using anyone's characters yet, but I'd wondered how SEs would fit in with the metaplot you'd created. Everyone seems to have their own ideas of what might happen. XD

I have to admit, though, the scenario you've created makes for some interesting tension. I can envision a few outsiders trying to stay hidden from the judges, to figure out what the heck is going on, or find a way back home. Assuming the judges aren't omniscient, they could try to avoid paper dolls and otherwise stay hidden, like guerillas. It's an interesting idea to consider...

That all aside, I'll be very curious to see how your future rounds play out. :3
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